/dev/tea
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I enjoyed the premise and overall story, but unfortunately I can't get past how preachy most of the dialogue comes across. Despite my agreement with the points I think the author was trying to get across, the conversations often feel more like one sided shower arguments dumped into a narrative rather than natural interactions.
I enjoyed the premise and overall story, but unfortunately I can't get past how preachy most of the dialogue comes across. Despite my agreement with the points I think the author was trying to get across, the conversations often feel more like one sided shower arguments dumped into a narrative rather than natural interactions.