Nowhere to run

1. A heroine who suffers from Too Stupid To Live syndrome, from not wanting to let anyone help her to driving her car into a waist deep river crossing (but somehow the guy’s pickup truck makes it across??)

2. A hero who recklessly mixes up known dangerous personal business with a woman already in the run

3. A story line that contradicts itself

Since this is a known reliable author, I’m going with “crammed on a deadline and skipped the editor” on this one.