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The Alpha's Mage

The Alpha's Mage

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Average rating3.7

15

The worldbuilding was not done well, so many things were glossed over - the mage types were never explained properly, details about the magic clans are vague, and the relationship between the alphas' role in their pack and their bonded mages' magic is confusing as well. Not much character depth for the MC's, and the romance and sex were just okay. The Warrens played a considerably big role in the book but their existence were just introduced around the 50% mark. I don't think the Maken pack ever found out about the theft either and it was so ridiculous because who wouldn't miss an entire person (in this case a valuable mage) missing from your pack lands? ??

Still giving the sequel a shot though, since the blurb does sound more interesting.

August 8, 2023Report this review