Flat Lens: Another New York Story

Well hey, this is my own book, but can I be objective here? I think the pacing could slow down a touch so that it is not a “Reader's Digest” jaunt, but that aside, I believe I've written a pretty good story. One reader said it was difficult to follow, but I'm not sure they read the whole story! I then asked a friend to read it and tell me straight up if he could follow the plot, and he remarked that it moved a little fast as well, but said it was definitely easy to track with the storyline and that it all made sense. I'm holding a giveaway for this book from this Saturday 6/27/20-Wednesday 7/1/20. Please feel free to download the free eBook, but if you do, please submit a rating or review, here or on Amazon. Many thanks, Brendan Shea, FitzGerald Press.