Anne
I liked most of the story, fake dating while being childhood rivals is a fun trope. A fun quick holiday romcom.
Things I didn't love:
- the girl was extremely hung up on their childhood rivalry when the guy was not at all, which made her seem very childish and petty.
- the guy had apparently been pining for like 10 years (in which they either didn't or barely saw each other), which honestly is a bit sad.
- the way the sex scenes were worded was uncomfortale for me (like 'milk', 'cunt', immediately thinking about 'putting a baby inside her').
I liked most of the story, fake dating while being childhood rivals is a fun trope. A fun quick holiday romcom.
Things I didn't love:
- the girl was extremely hung up on their childhood rivalry when the guy was not at all, which made her seem very childish and petty.
- the guy had apparently been pining for like 10 years (in which they either didn't or barely saw each other), which honestly is a bit sad.
- the way the sex scenes were worded was uncomfortale for me (like 'milk', 'cunt', immediately thinking about 'putting a baby inside her').