Beldryn
This was a such a mess. I don't even know where to start. There was barely to no plot, no character development, bad writing, it didn't even look like it was edited, the chapter headers give off my 10 year old help me make this, there were almost no explanations as to why characters did certain things, very little reason to like any of them, no exploration of the setting at all. Also all of this 400 paged book happened over the course of a single week. I swear, this could have been condensed to 100 pages max, and then we could have gotten into actual interesting things. This truly felt like an extended edition of setup.
The positives: the concept is interesting. The school, combined with the zodiac signs and different species was fun. I just wish we would have actually seen any of it come into play.
Vague spoilers from here on:
I firmly, FIRMLY disliked the constant invading of personal space. No boundaries whatsoever, and I don't care if you want to put this on "but it's their nature as an alpha male wolf" or whatever. Don't care. It was way too much. Also I once made the mistake of counting how many times the FMCs got horny over characters in one single chapter. It was 9 mentions in the first 5 pages alone. And it isn't as if this was an unlucky choice of chapter. I reckon if you pull out all the horny comments, you get 100 pages less. It was actually ridiculous. It's also funny how almost the entire ending wouldn't have happened if the MMCs weren't all hot and sexy. Nothing would have happened.
Also
Mouth-humping???? My eyes. Where is the bleach
This was a such a mess. I don't even know where to start. There was barely to no plot, no character development, bad writing, it didn't even look like it was edited, the chapter headers give off my 10 year old help me make this, there were almost no explanations as to why characters did certain things, very little reason to like any of them, no exploration of the setting at all. Also all of this 400 paged book happened over the course of a single week. I swear, this could have been condensed to 100 pages max, and then we could have gotten into actual interesting things. This truly felt like an extended edition of setup.
The positives: the concept is interesting. The school, combined with the zodiac signs and different species was fun. I just wish we would have actually seen any of it come into play.
Vague spoilers from here on:
I firmly, FIRMLY disliked the constant invading of personal space. No boundaries whatsoever, and I don't care if you want to put this on "but it's their nature as an alpha male wolf" or whatever. Don't care. It was way too much. Also I once made the mistake of counting how many times the FMCs got horny over characters in one single chapter. It was 9 mentions in the first 5 pages alone. And it isn't as if this was an unlucky choice of chapter. I reckon if you pull out all the horny comments, you get 100 pages less. It was actually ridiculous. It's also funny how almost the entire ending wouldn't have happened if the MMCs weren't all hot and sexy. Nothing would have happened.
Also
Mouth-humping???? My eyes. Where is the bleach