Sammy
I've owned this book forever, and I finally got around to reading it. Let me write up a report card for this book.
Trope: "But Daddy, I love him"; forbidden romance.
World Building 7/10 note: felt like SOA fanfiction
Plot: 6/10 note: things were introduced but barely carried through to when they were actually important. Then the big bad wasn't really introduced until near the end.
Dialogue 2/10: This was horrendous and almost made me drop the book. Way too much usage of the word "cool" and the phrase "you got me". In fact, it felt like everyone had the same darn speech pattern. It carried the plot like a sifter carries flour.
Character development: 9/10 there were good character arcs.
Overall: This felt like a high school SOA fanfic that I would find on Wattpad or AO3. I wouldn't recommend it, and I definitely won't be reading the next one.
I've owned this book forever, and I finally got around to reading it. Let me write up a report card for this book.
Trope: "But Daddy, I love him"; forbidden romance.
World Building 7/10 note: felt like SOA fanfiction
Plot: 6/10 note: things were introduced but barely carried through to when they were actually important. Then the big bad wasn't really introduced until near the end.
Dialogue 2/10: This was horrendous and almost made me drop the book. Way too much usage of the word "cool" and the phrase "you got me". In fact, it felt like everyone had the same darn speech pattern. It carried the plot like a sifter carries flour.
Character development: 9/10 there were good character arcs.
Overall: This felt like a high school SOA fanfic that I would find on Wattpad or AO3. I wouldn't recommend it, and I definitely won't be reading the next one.