Lori
This book starts off strong with interesting characters and a hearty competitive atmosphere between the two love interests. From there I had a tough time staying interested in this book.
One thing that made it hard to read was the internal thoughts. At times it was large blocks of thoughts and feelings while at other times it was short and jumpy. It was hard to get into a rhythm with this much inconsistency much less stay interested in the main story. The timeline is also a little hard to follow. The timeline jumps around with no connection made to help its readers.
I liked the supporting characters, and the author does well with including without making it feel like the characters were tokens or forced. The author also does well at showing a realistic sexual relationship. The rest of the relationship however was wrought with miscommunication or simply no communication. This does lead to some deception though withholding information until they could hurt each other most making it harder to root for the couple as the book went on.
This wasn’t for me.
This book starts off strong with interesting characters and a hearty competitive atmosphere between the two love interests. From there I had a tough time staying interested in this book.
One thing that made it hard to read was the internal thoughts. At times it was large blocks of thoughts and feelings while at other times it was short and jumpy. It was hard to get into a rhythm with this much inconsistency much less stay interested in the main story. The timeline is also a little hard to follow. The timeline jumps around with no connection made to help its readers.
I liked the supporting characters, and the author does well with including without making it feel like the characters were tokens or forced. The author also does well at showing a realistic sexual relationship. The rest of the relationship however was wrought with miscommunication or simply no communication. This does lead to some deception though withholding information until they could hurt each other most making it harder to root for the couple as the book went on.
This wasn’t for me.