Lori
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The story is not developed enough or maybe that it’s not sharp enough to make it’s point. The story is emotionally disconnected that the climax is more anti-climatic. No matter how I think of this story there is no impact of what happens. It’s hard to explain but it’s the same as how what I am writing now won’t have an impact to those reading it.
The story is not developed enough or maybe that it’s not sharp enough to make it’s point. The story is emotionally disconnected that the climax is more anti-climatic. No matter how I think of this story there is no impact of what happens. It’s hard to explain but it’s the same as how what I am writing now won’t have an impact to those reading it.