Lori
For an older story this was strong and very creeping. Quickly you are drawn into the characters perspective and the author does well at building a slow creeping fear into the story. It’s not a shocking story but it’s one that makes you think and lingers near afterwards.
The only thing stopping me from rating this higher is that I wish you got more time within the time frame selected. There are skips in time that are a loss to the story. What I mean is that the time frame the author selected was good, but we need more time with the character to truly feel the mental fatigue and paranoia that she feels.
This was worth the read.
For an older story this was strong and very creeping. Quickly you are drawn into the characters perspective and the author does well at building a slow creeping fear into the story. It’s not a shocking story but it’s one that makes you think and lingers near afterwards.
The only thing stopping me from rating this higher is that I wish you got more time within the time frame selected. There are skips in time that are a loss to the story. What I mean is that the time frame the author selected was good, but we need more time with the character to truly feel the mental fatigue and paranoia that she feels.
This was worth the read.