Lori
I didn’t mind the set up of them both being hung up on other people, it was an interesting way to start the book. It wasn’t a bad book but is felt more like a Young Adult book then an Adult one. Both characters felt like teenagers in the way they handled their situations. This isn’t bad, but I’m almost 30, and I’m not interested in childish relationships in my romance novels.
The main characters talk openly but still manage keep things from each other. There is a lot of cycling in the story of should I trust him/her and am I over my crush. I felt like the author should have focused more on getting over people that aren’t interested in you and finding love for yourself then a dramatic story. The drama is puffed up fluff that doesn’t present a good enough reason to keep them apart.
There are some good writing and parts of the story. I am unsure if I will try the next book as I want something a little more grown up then this one.
I didn’t mind the set up of them both being hung up on other people, it was an interesting way to start the book. It wasn’t a bad book but is felt more like a Young Adult book then an Adult one. Both characters felt like teenagers in the way they handled their situations. This isn’t bad, but I’m almost 30, and I’m not interested in childish relationships in my romance novels.
The main characters talk openly but still manage keep things from each other. There is a lot of cycling in the story of should I trust him/her and am I over my crush. I felt like the author should have focused more on getting over people that aren’t interested in you and finding love for yourself then a dramatic story. The drama is puffed up fluff that doesn’t present a good enough reason to keep them apart.
There are some good writing and parts of the story. I am unsure if I will try the next book as I want something a little more grown up then this one.