Lori
The majority of the book is a miscommunication trope done poorly. The female lead does some incredibly stupid things that it’s had to believe she’s in the field that she’s in. The author wrote her too child like and constantly describes her as small. While the male lead is just this huge man, based on numerous descriptions, that has no personality. He’s so bland even his friends barely can describe him. His interests are working out and eating for fuel. There is a huge lack of chemistry between them, but we are told they fit together because he’s huge and she’s small. The book is almost two thirds done when the relationship finally starts to build. At this point sadly I’m no longer interested.
The author didn’t do a great job with her friends as they are only there to push the story forward and don’t show up unless needed. Even her asexuality is thrown in at the worst time and mention once. I don’t even want to start on the sex seen, just know he’s huge and she’s small. Its mentioned over and over that the male lead is an asshole and he really wasn’t the one actual instance brought up is him just doing his job. I don’t know why the author placed such an importance on mentioning that every other character thinks he’s an asshole.
The majority of the book is a miscommunication trope done poorly. The female lead does some incredibly stupid things that it’s had to believe she’s in the field that she’s in. The author wrote her too child like and constantly describes her as small. While the male lead is just this huge man, based on numerous descriptions, that has no personality. He’s so bland even his friends barely can describe him. His interests are working out and eating for fuel. There is a huge lack of chemistry between them, but we are told they fit together because he’s huge and she’s small. The book is almost two thirds done when the relationship finally starts to build. At this point sadly I’m no longer interested.
The author didn’t do a great job with her friends as they are only there to push the story forward and don’t show up unless needed. Even her asexuality is thrown in at the worst time and mention once. I don’t even want to start on the sex seen, just know he’s huge and she’s small. Its mentioned over and over that the male lead is an asshole and he really wasn’t the one actual instance brought up is him just doing his job. I don’t know why the author placed such an importance on mentioning that every other character thinks he’s an asshole.