Lori
The story is interesting, but the book is long and full of unimportant details. The author goes overboard on extraneous details throughout the book. I truly feel like the book could have been halved, possibly even quartered, and still relayed the same amount information. There is a lot of repeating details and immaterial world events that don’t impact the story enough that they should have been added.
The story is interesting, but the book is long and full of unimportant details. The author goes overboard on extraneous details throughout the book. I truly feel like the book could have been halved, possibly even quartered, and still relayed the same amount information. There is a lot of repeating details and immaterial world events that don’t impact the story enough that they should have been added.