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I made the mistake of reading "Scream for Us" first. This book has all of Quinn's scenes, but also the POV of the male leads. Just skip that one and start with this one.

I DNF at 52%.

With that out of the way...

The writing for the explicit scenes is severally lacking in any detail. This book fails the "show, don't tell" bar spectacularly. When every sex scene is written to be so incredibly quick, clinical and sterile, it gets boring real fast. I felt like I was reading a grocery receipt.

I did enjoy most of the rest of the story before I DNF, especially the backgrounds of all three male leads. Honestly, fleshing everything out by turning this into a proper novel would have made a massive difference.

I'm not even going to bother with the other two books In the series.

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