Josh

CAWPILE SCORE

C-5

A-7

W-6

P-7

I-8

L-7

E-8

TOTAL-6.86/10

Great Prologue, good worldbuilding and I like the way the magic is set up. Interested to see where it goes from here.

Sometimes power levels felt a bit inconsistent, good plot. Nice atmosphere

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CAWPILE

Characters

Raysha is a great character. Strong drive.

Hlaya and Octavian seem to have inconsistent power levels or it feels like they do.

Atmosphere

Good, interesting to have out

Writing

Good

Plot

Investment

Logic

Nothing felt out of place for me

Enjoyment

I did enjoy this book

Misc

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