Josh
CAWPILE SCORE
C-5
A-7
W-6
P-7
I-8
L-7
E-8
TOTAL-6.86/10
Great Prologue, good worldbuilding and I like the way the magic is set up. Interested to see where it goes from here.
Sometimes power levels felt a bit inconsistent, good plot. Nice atmosphere
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CAWPILE
Characters
Raysha is a great character. Strong drive.
Hlaya and Octavian seem to have inconsistent power levels or it feels like they do.
Atmosphere
Good, interesting to have out
Writing
Good
Plot
Investment
Logic
Nothing felt out of place for me
Enjoyment
I did enjoy this book
Misc
</spoiler>
CAWPILE SCORE
C-5
A-7
W-6
P-7
I-8
L-7
E-8
TOTAL-6.86/10
Great Prologue, good worldbuilding and I like the way the magic is set up. Interested to see where it goes from here.
Sometimes power levels felt a bit inconsistent, good plot. Nice atmosphere
<spoiler>
CAWPILE
Characters
Raysha is a great character. Strong drive.
Hlaya and Octavian seem to have inconsistent power levels or it feels like they do.
Atmosphere
Good, interesting to have out
Writing
Good
Plot
Investment
Logic
Nothing felt out of place for me
Enjoyment
I did enjoy this book
Misc
</spoiler>