JJ
I liked the plot and the writing, but it seemed like it was trying too hard to be emotional, so instead of empathizing with the MCs, I kept wondering how they could cry so much and when they would stop. In other words, the emotions didn't hit hard because it was trying to hit hard the entire time.
I was also disappointed by the fade to black, yet it was explicit enough that I wouldn't recommend it to a young teen. I'd prefer it to be one or the other. Nothing worse than a bunch of build up leading to a sudden F2B.
Still an enjoyable read overall.
I liked the plot and the writing, but it seemed like it was trying too hard to be emotional, so instead of empathizing with the MCs, I kept wondering how they could cry so much and when they would stop. In other words, the emotions didn't hit hard because it was trying to hit hard the entire time.
I was also disappointed by the fade to black, yet it was explicit enough that I wouldn't recommend it to a young teen. I'd prefer it to be one or the other. Nothing worse than a bunch of build up leading to a sudden F2B.
Still an enjoyable read overall.