

Overall well written with an interesting plot, though I found it hard to believe that Cael would be so naive about what would happen after the ceremony. It seemed very out of character, especially because of how obvious his father was about it!
Overall well written with an interesting plot, though I found it hard to believe that Cael would be so naive about what would happen after the ceremony. It seemed very out of character, especially because of how obvious his father was about it!