Kevin Lau
DNF at 81%
Commits a cardinal sin of not starting its story until the midpoint. Even then, I didn't find any of the ideas it was engaging with interesting and everything I felt was interesting was either glossed over or left incomplete.
It's a meandering story with good, generic prose, each chapter giving a ton of unnecessary set-up then presenting half a scene. Strange, unmotivated presentation of timeline all for a simple premise that will lead to a predictable conclusion.
DNF at 81%
Commits a cardinal sin of not starting its story until the midpoint. Even then, I didn't find any of the ideas it was engaging with interesting and everything I felt was interesting was either glossed over or left incomplete.
It's a meandering story with good, generic prose, each chapter giving a ton of unnecessary set-up then presenting half a scene. Strange, unmotivated presentation of timeline all for a simple premise that will lead to a predictable conclusion.