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What a fast-paced story! It was so fast I felt many things just happened because the sake of them being there, not for the story to be good. Everything happened so fast from the very beginning of the book. Even the ending was happening so fast without the real details of explanations. I didn't like the rushing feeling I got from this book.


The premises were intriguingly good. The first half of the book was good too. Still fast paced but enjoyable and make sense in a way the story carried on. However, after 70% or something, when the real plot twist (?) appeared, the story became so rushing. The plot itself had really good potential but unfortunately the delivery was not it.


I usually didn't mind when the pace of the book I read was fast, however this book was not only fast paced but rushing too. Not only that, there were also many things happening at once. Especially around 70% to the end of the book. Everything happened so fast yet until 99% of the book, there was no real solution for both characters.


The time gaps were also my problem with this book. There were many important scenes happening but after that there were time gaps. For me, it was like important stuff just barely mentioned and solved was the main theme of this book.


The relationship between Gabriel (MMC) and Willow (FMC) was of course happening fast too. Fortunately I liked both Gabriel and Willow. They both had flaws but I understood why they acted like that. I just wish their relationship was delivered deeper because their story had so much potential.


Thank you to Amarie Collins and The Author Agency for the ARC.

Originally posted at www.goodreads.com.

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