Marlobo
Fresh Ice
Loved the story, the characters, Marco as Ash's alter ego, and the dry style. And the humor (oh my gosh, it was midnight and I was all LMAO)
Yet, the editing is atrocious, if not non-existent: repeated paragraphs, missing sections or pages. At least twice, when turning a page, I found the ending of a word followed by a paragraph completely unrelated to what had been said before. Yes, I checked locations to make sure I hadn't missed something, but it still made no sense. There were also some other inconsistencies as well.
I doubt the book even had a proofread. It detracts one and a half stars from my rating.
Loved the story, the characters, Marco as Ash's alter ego, and the dry style. And the humor (oh my gosh, it was midnight and I was all LMAO)
Yet, the editing is atrocious, if not non-existent: repeated paragraphs, missing sections or pages. At least twice, when turning a page, I found the ending of a word followed by a paragraph completely unrelated to what had been said before. Yes, I checked locations to make sure I hadn't missed something, but it still made no sense. There were also some other inconsistencies as well.
I doubt the book even had a proofread. It detracts one and a half stars from my rating.