It wasn't bad, but I wouldn't say it was great either. Some style choices hurt the pacing as I had to pause and adjust my brain back and forth from reading in third person to second person and back. The story is a good concept but I wasn't able to really get invested in it. Hopefully anybody else that reads it has a better time than I did and enjoys it.
Some what interesting premise, horrible execution. The world is confusing, the plot is nonsensical and the characters are flat. They three heroes are generic hero kids that don't even feel believable. The villain is a basic mustache twirling antagonist that fails to come off as anything more complex. Failed to keep me interested.