I don't know that I've ever read a book that repeats itself quite as much as this one, not just repeating sentences/scenes from other PoVs, it repeats character thoughts and actions in the same scene too.
Powerless is an amalgamation of many popular Fantasy YA books and I feel like you can tell which ones the author pulled the ideas from as they happen, it's an odd feeling to be bludgeoned by tropes. I feel as though the author needed a good editor and a couple of revisions and it otherwise would've been a fairly standard YA fantasy/romance.
Not sure why so many booktubers/booktokers have recommended this as it's not particularly unusual in plot or characters, nor unique in prose. However, my understanding is that this is a young author, and their first book, so I'm hopeful that a future book may be better.
This is more of a 2 1/2 star read for me.
I re-read this because I remember how much I enjoyed it when I first read it (when I was a teenager) and hoped it would live up to my memory, it didn't.
Whilst it was a page-turner, I very much disliked most of the characters, most of the time; a lot of the conflict felt like they were teenagers who couldn't talk out their problems and my biggest gripe was how her getting pregnant was handled.They had sex (nearly while he was drunk and she sober, Yikes), he gets mad she was a virgin and might get pregnant (no protection), they sort it out (barely), have sex again, she gets pregnant (no surprise) and he's mad that's she pregnant... like, what?...
I'll probably read through the others in the series to see if they hold up to my memory or not.
I do like Susan Mallery's writing style so maybe I'll enjoy her newer stuff more.
I wish there was some conflict in this book. there was nothing.
After they got together that was it, smooth sailing... It really just got boring for me. Also nothing really came of her parents being emotionally unavailable it was only there as a contrast to how cohesive his family was.
I liked the writing, the dialog was good, the characters were unique and felt different but overall everything ended up feeling very bland
the antagonist is far too evil without sufficient reasoning... Also why wouldn't the FMC just go to the prince (with all the security and intel) and say ‘hey keep it quiet but your head chef is holding my sister hostage, can you help?' doesn't make much sense other than for plot
Also the prince not knowing she was the one the device was pointing out, especially after eliminating all the other candidates is just willful ignorance.
Boy, does this book exemplify why I dislike contemporary romance so much...
The constant pop culture references, the third act breakup being incredibly dumb, characters being so unlikable because it's the only why to cause conflict.
The writing was jaunty and fun, the plot while unlikely wasn't completely unbelievable, and whilst short, the romance didn't feel like insta-love, but the sisters are a level of unlikable that I almost stopped reading. They're so petty and childish, even Nikki the FMC, that I didn't even care when Diego and her reunited.
I really liked the beginning but I got so uninterested around the 70% mark that it took me weeks to pick it back up and read through to the end. I will say it did start to pick back up after the third act conflict, however I don't really feel satisfied by the resolution to said conflict.
I overall enjoyed the books that I've read in this series so I feel like that helps carry it to a 3.5 star read for me, but losing interest 2/3 of the way in seems to be common for me with this author.
I wish the magic of this world was more thoroughly explored.