Tegan
I had to DNF at 15%. The writing is awkward, some sentences make no sense, and it feels like we were dropped in the middle of the story. Explaining to the reader at the 15% mark why the MC is there was very awkward even though it gave me some of the information I needed. This isn't the type of bread crumbing that usually works in horror or any genre of fiction. In my opinion this book needs to be revisited by the writer and editor asap. It shouldn't be a struggle for the reader to get through each chapter which was unfortunately my experience. Was this translated from a language other than English? That might account for some of the odd sentences. I think the writer has some solid ideas that are worth exploring but the delivery needs work.
This book was provided to me by Netgalley and all opinions are given freely and of my own volition.
I had to DNF at 15%. The writing is awkward, some sentences make no sense, and it feels like we were dropped in the middle of the story. Explaining to the reader at the 15% mark why the MC is there was very awkward even though it gave me some of the information I needed. This isn't the type of bread crumbing that usually works in horror or any genre of fiction. In my opinion this book needs to be revisited by the writer and editor asap. It shouldn't be a struggle for the reader to get through each chapter which was unfortunately my experience. Was this translated from a language other than English? That might account for some of the odd sentences. I think the writer has some solid ideas that are worth exploring but the delivery needs work.
This book was provided to me by Netgalley and all opinions are given freely and of my own volition.