Maria
The beginning and end had some interesting plot points. The middle had a lull. This type of romance was not really to my taste, and there are a lot of darker moments. The ending gives me hope that things are setting up to be a bit more interesting and I can see some potential for the story, so I'll try book 2 and see how it goes. Since this is an indie author, I am hoping the second book will be an improvement in craft and story.
The beginning and end had some interesting plot points. The middle had a lull. This type of romance was not really to my taste, and there are a lot of darker moments. The ending gives me hope that things are setting up to be a bit more interesting and I can see some potential for the story, so I'll try book 2 and see how it goes. Since this is an indie author, I am hoping the second book will be an improvement in craft and story.