Mer Barr
This is the type of science fiction and young adult that I enjoy; alot of technology and not alot of young adult angst. It also has a plot that moves along, no side tracking for topics that aren't relevant or pausing for too long, and characters that have some depth to them.
On second read I see alot of disjointed sentences and disconnects in logic like how can you tell someone is wearing blue if you're in the dark?
This is the type of science fiction and young adult that I enjoy; alot of technology and not alot of young adult angst. It also has a plot that moves along, no side tracking for topics that aren't relevant or pausing for too long, and characters that have some depth to them.
On second read I see alot of disjointed sentences and disconnects in logic like how can you tell someone is wearing blue if you're in the dark?