Adyasa

Okay, so I'm going to pause/DNF this book at around 35%

Firstly, this whole thing happening after 20 goddamn years... I just can't wrap my head around it. The FMC stayed stuck on him all this time, while the MMC basically moved on?

And honestly, if you come back to your ex after 20 years and willingly put yourself in the same surroundings, wouldn't there at least be some real conversation? Give me the angst, give me the confrontation, something. Instead it just feels like everything is skimming the surface.

Granted, I haven't completely read this book yet, so maybe the things I'm frustrated about do get sorted later. But for now, it's not clicking with me, so I'm putting it down.

At 55%, and bro, omfg, if anyone is ‘hot and cold,' it's you.

At around 50%
Still reading, but this dynamic is throwing me off. The FMC is 22, the MMC is 30, and she's the coach's goddaughter and he's one of the coach's players. It already feels like a fine line, but then he goes and shares explicit details about her with his friends, who also know the coach? That's just... uncomfortable.

Someone needs to proofread this.

The plot of this book so far is way too unrealistic and I can't continue further.

DNF at 14%