Autumn Witch
I really wanted to like this book. The premises sounded interesting, but they just did not deliver. Five assassins, plot to kill god king, the plotting, lies and treachery, what not to like?
A lot as it seems.
If you want a book with a good heist/plot that will make you question your sanity - go read "The lies of Locke Lamora".
Will say it here. The writing is not bad. The story flows, it is an easy page turner, has really interesting bits of story building. Have no idea how the world functions as we seem to go from expensive places to gang infested, no rules cities, but it doesn't break the immersion.
But it isn't what the blurb says. The main plot is barely noticeable for most of the book.
At some point this book became romance tiktok tropes bingo. Check if you can find it:
- One bed,
- Sunshine-grumpy
- Enemies to lovers
- The Double-Cross
- Forced Proximity
- Forbidden Love
- Incapable of Love
- Miscomunication
There is too many POV and they are just blending with each other as only two of them have unique voice and third one just drops a lot of f words to show how hardcore, street he is.
The plot is weak, nobody asks questions and in world that is described I laughed every time that character without doubt accepted explanation of somebody else behaviour. Because you know hardcore killers and liars are known for only telling the real version of the story.
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Things that annoyed me so much:
- How come a street wise, hand for hire pledges his sword without hesitation because the prince tells him he will be good and do all this nice things, just give him power. This guy suffered under rules of nobles, he seen how little they care about people and still just drops to his knees to pledge alliance...
- Why did Sora not leave as soon as she found out her indenture was burned? Heck why was it with the Ty in a first place. The logical thing to do was poison him, burn it herself (if they were stupid enough to send it with her), find her sister and kill the S guy.
- The prince is useless. The revelation of hunting people isn't maybe as innocent as I though... This is ladies and gentlemen the new bright future of the kingdom
- If his daughter can stop time, why don't she just go into palace and steal the ring. I know the whole price thing, but that would be a one off and no need for the whole elaborated plot.
- The never ending repetition of scene from different perspectives....
- The whole plot and their co-conspirators is just so unbelievable with the world that has been presented.
I really wanted to like this book. The premises sounded interesting, but they just did not deliver. Five assassins, plot to kill god king, the plotting, lies and treachery, what not to like?
A lot as it seems.
If you want a book with a good heist/plot that will make you question your sanity - go read "The lies of Locke Lamora".
Will say it here. The writing is not bad. The story flows, it is an easy page turner, has really interesting bits of story building. Have no idea how the world functions as we seem to go from expensive places to gang infested, no rules cities, but it doesn't break the immersion.
But it isn't what the blurb says. The main plot is barely noticeable for most of the book.
At some point this book became romance tiktok tropes bingo. Check if you can find it:
- One bed,
- Sunshine-grumpy
- Enemies to lovers
- The Double-Cross
- Forced Proximity
- Forbidden Love
- Incapable of Love
- Miscomunication
There is too many POV and they are just blending with each other as only two of them have unique voice and third one just drops a lot of f words to show how hardcore, street he is.
The plot is weak, nobody asks questions and in world that is described I laughed every time that character without doubt accepted explanation of somebody else behaviour. Because you know hardcore killers and liars are known for only telling the real version of the story.
------------------- SPOILERS -----------------------
Things that annoyed me so much:
- How come a street wise, hand for hire pledges his sword without hesitation because the prince tells him he will be good and do all this nice things, just give him power. This guy suffered under rules of nobles, he seen how little they care about people and still just drops to his knees to pledge alliance...
- Why did Sora not leave as soon as she found out her indenture was burned? Heck why was it with the Ty in a first place. The logical thing to do was poison him, burn it herself (if they were stupid enough to send it with her), find her sister and kill the S guy.
- The prince is useless. The revelation of hunting people isn't maybe as innocent as I though... This is ladies and gentlemen the new bright future of the kingdom
- If his daughter can stop time, why don't she just go into palace and steal the ring. I know the whole price thing, but that would be a one off and no need for the whole elaborated plot.
- The never ending repetition of scene from different perspectives....
- The whole plot and their co-conspirators is just so unbelievable with the world that has been presented.