
I was so set on giving this 5 stars, but I feel like it dragged a bit towards the end and Ian ending up being Jacob's father had me rolling my eyes. I also didn't think Ray's side story with his wife and son was really necessary - I just didn't care about their story at all. Other than that, a really good thriller.
3.5 stars. I enjoyed the story but I feel like things wrapped up a little too perfectly in the end. I don't think every single little thing needs to be connected. All the characters and plot points were hard to keep track of at some points, I found myself having to flip back in the book and reread certain parts.
1.5 stars. I don't even usually write reviews for books but this one made me so mad I just had to come back 2 days after finishing and dish.
Sandra Brown writes as if her readers are idiots and won't remember something she told us just pages earlier. It's like we'll find out on page 20 that someone has tattoos and on page 23 she'll say, β___, with the big tattooed arm that has tattoos on itβ. Her dialogue is unnatural and clunky and it makes for a super strange read. I get it's a fiction book but so many things that are said sound nothing like how actual people speak.
The biggest issue I have with this book is Bellamy and Dent's relationship. I see several reviews saying that Dent is their dream bad boy and what ππ» the ππ» fuck ππ». He's a big broody baby who thinks being emotionally disconnected makes him sexy and throws a tantrum every time Bellamy turns him down. Not to mention, he also uses her vague signs of arousal as a reason as to why he shouldn't stop trying to have sex with her even though she repeatedly says no. The fact that they end up together is weird and forced. That may seem like a spoiler but it's not because you can pick up that Brown is going to put them in a relationship on like page 4.
I gave a half star for the twist/finding out the murderer, but even that wasn't done that well. I felt that much more background and story revolving around that would have been more interesting. Overall, it had an interesting premise but it was poorly written, had a shitty romance, and a poorly executed twist. Thanks, I hate it.
some of these I really connected to but a lot of them felt more like random quotes than poems. I think this βinstagram poetryβ kind of style really isn't my jam
you can hear mine & Jacqueline's (webebookn) full thoughts on her YT channel!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zSAapEm3V6o
ok mrs. haley james scott
I just really cannot get into this. something about the writing is off to me.
I listened to this for about an hour and wowowow I've never been so bored! bye shistar