Drew
The first third is interesting, but the world-building is never quite as detailed as I would like. Some interesting premises that I wish had more detail to them.
The middle third is the most predictable Harry Potter / Hunger Games / YA-character-advancing-against-all-odds shit I’ve ever read. Lazy and not engaging at all.
The last third is pretty exciting, but again underdeveloped!
Honestly this book could be a set of bullet points and it’d be just about as good.
The first third is interesting, but the world-building is never quite as detailed as I would like. Some interesting premises that I wish had more detail to them.
The middle third is the most predictable Harry Potter / Hunger Games / YA-character-advancing-against-all-odds shit I’ve ever read. Lazy and not engaging at all.
The last third is pretty exciting, but again underdeveloped!
Honestly this book could be a set of bullet points and it’d be just about as good.