Ian
it was a dark, cold day. they went on the cold road. the ate cold food from a cold can. they coldly froze in the cold night before the cold got even colder. the cold boy cried "why is it so cold". the cold man stared into the cold ash silently. also it was cold
it was a dark, cold day. they went on the cold road. the ate cold food from a cold can. they coldly froze in the cold night before the cold got even colder. the cold boy cried "why is it so cold". the cold man stared into the cold ash silently. also it was cold
A lot of the same problems from the first book (gary stu ass main character, very little side character development that didn’t come from the stock fantasy trope bin) amplified three times over. You can only read about how Viz is stronger, tougher, blah blah blah so many times before it all just runs together. Still gripping on a page by page basis (for the most part) but I really hope the third book takes a breath or two.
He literally murders the leadership of *his entire world* and it gets brushed past. He watches his best friend die - again! - but our stone hero continues grinding forward, to uhhh meet up with the Big Bad he thought was going to destroy the entire world. Also he gets to see his entire family (and best friend) again yay! Death is meaningless!
A lot of the same problems from the first book (gary stu ass main character, very little side character development that didn’t come from the stock fantasy trope bin) amplified three times over. You can only read about how Viz is stronger, tougher, blah blah blah so many times before it all just runs together. Still gripping on a page by page basis (for the most part) but I really hope the third book takes a breath or two.
He literally murders the leadership of *his entire world* and it gets brushed past. He watches his best friend die - again! - but our stone hero continues grinding forward, to uhhh meet up with the Big Bad he thought was going to destroy the entire world. Also he gets to see his entire family (and best friend) again yay! Death is meaningless!
it was a dark, cold day. they went on the cold road. the ate cold food from a cold can. they coldly froze in the cold night before the cold got even colder. the cold boy cried "why is it so cold". the cold man stared into the cold ash silently. also it was cold
it was a dark, cold day. they went on the cold road. the ate cold food from a cold can. they coldly froze in the cold night before the cold got even colder. the cold boy cried "why is it so cold". the cold man stared into the cold ash silently. also it was cold
