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A lot of the same problems from the first book (gary stu ass main character, very little side character development that didn’t come from the stock fantasy trope bin) amplified three times over. You can only read about how Viz is stronger, tougher, blah blah blah so many times before it all just runs together. Still gripping on a page by page basis (for the most part) but I really hope the third book takes a breath or two.
He literally murders the leadership of *his entire world* and it gets brushed past. He watches his best friend die - again! - but our stone hero continues grinding forward, to uhhh meet up with the Big Bad he thought was going to destroy the entire world. Also he gets to see his entire family (and best friend) again yay! Death is meaningless!
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extremely basic character development, and peter is basically a wooden board with IBS (that was quite a reveal). I would have appreciated being beat over the head with less “the obviously evil guy is evil” and musings about famous philosophers/ authors /etc and more character development. It never quite comes together unfortunately but was still sometimes engaging to read, flashbacks aside
an addicting page turner but boy it's really one celever concept stuffed to the brim with every other fantasy trope ever written. Protagonist is good at everything and has almost no flaws. Most other characters are barely described. I really wish it took a minute to breathe at some point and remembered that our protagonist is a normal human being and not superman.