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extremely basic character development, and peter is basically a wooden board with IBS (that was quite a reveal). I would have appreciated being beat over the head with less “the obviously evil guy is evil” and musings about famous philosophers/ authors /etc and more character development. It never quite comes together unfortunately but was still sometimes engaging to read, flashbacks aside
an addicting page turner but boy it's really one celever concept stuffed to the brim with every other fantasy trope ever written. Protagonist is good at everything and has almost no flaws. Most other characters are barely described. I really wish it took a minute to breathe at some point and remembered that our protagonist is a normal human being and not superman.