John
I imagine that there is a select group to whom this book is amazing. To me, it reads like what someone would write when they want to convey romance, but they've never themselves experienced romance. I can't decide if the ideal reader is one who wants spice, and is willing to accept a thin plot and low world-building, or someone who is looking for a paranormal Gothic tale, and is willing to accept an annoyingly stunted protagonist banging the most beautiful man who ever existed.
This feels like playing dress-up, as opposed to role-playing. Need a spooky setting? New Orleans. Details? Unnecessary. Time period? Unclear. Because we are not role-playing; we are playing dress up. Add one part horse-cock and a dash of conflict. Stir to combine.
I imagine that there is a select group to whom this book is amazing. To me, it reads like what someone would write when they want to convey romance, but they've never themselves experienced romance. I can't decide if the ideal reader is one who wants spice, and is willing to accept a thin plot and low world-building, or someone who is looking for a paranormal Gothic tale, and is willing to accept an annoyingly stunted protagonist banging the most beautiful man who ever existed.
This feels like playing dress-up, as opposed to role-playing. Need a spooky setting? New Orleans. Details? Unnecessary. Time period? Unclear. Because we are not role-playing; we are playing dress up. Add one part horse-cock and a dash of conflict. Stir to combine.