nigmatillium
The 1st person narration in this book put me off completely. I already knew I prefer 3rd person, but I do enjoy the occasional 1st person story. The only reason I didn't drop this book is because it was so short. Even so, it took me too long to read it.
The story itself was neat, though. The murder-mystery part was not bad, and I had some fun with my own "investigation".
The relationship part was okay, I guess. I might have liked something more than Tim being scared and overthinking Jack's behaviour. And maybe I would have liked Jack using his words sooner because, when they finally cleared things up (in the last few pages), it was a lot all at once. Made me wonder when the fuck did they get to that point.
Anyway, I may skip the next 1st person book I come across.
And what was that accident about after all? Got zero context.
The 1st person narration in this book put me off completely. I already knew I prefer 3rd person, but I do enjoy the occasional 1st person story. The only reason I didn't drop this book is because it was so short. Even so, it took me too long to read it.
The story itself was neat, though. The murder-mystery part was not bad, and I had some fun with my own "investigation".
The relationship part was okay, I guess. I might have liked something more than Tim being scared and overthinking Jack's behaviour. And maybe I would have liked Jack using his words sooner because, when they finally cleared things up (in the last few pages), it was a lot all at once. Made me wonder when the fuck did they get to that point.
Anyway, I may skip the next 1st person book I come across.
And what was that accident about after all? Got zero context.