Ninett
Solid work. I somehow didn't realise there would be a romance element to this novel and didn't find it very convincing. People do not start touching each other's face and hair upon first meeting. There were lots of good ideas and unique settings/ situations in the novel, but I did feel like the work was a repository of these great ideas essentially just cobbled together. More of a patchwork than a seamless story.
That said, the characters were interesting and there were enough twists to keep me reading, so I can't rate it badly :)
Solid work. I somehow didn't realise there would be a romance element to this novel and didn't find it very convincing. People do not start touching each other's face and hair upon first meeting. There were lots of good ideas and unique settings/ situations in the novel, but I did feel like the work was a repository of these great ideas essentially just cobbled together. More of a patchwork than a seamless story.
That said, the characters were interesting and there were enough twists to keep me reading, so I can't rate it badly :)