Steve
She-Wolf and Cub
This was suitably energetic and largely kept me involved to the end, but it did commit the cardinal sin (in my eyes) of mashing together a serialized story into a single book without any additional editing. This meant that there was a lot of repeated sentences (and not just in a Basil Exposition sense), and also at least one place where a statement in one chapter seemed to disagree with the previous chapter. So, a good read, but a few minor faults meant I kept bouncing out of the story. Still, if there was a (better edited) sequel, I would be interested.
This was suitably energetic and largely kept me involved to the end, but it did commit the cardinal sin (in my eyes) of mashing together a serialized story into a single book without any additional editing. This meant that there was a lot of repeated sentences (and not just in a Basil Exposition sense), and also at least one place where a statement in one chapter seemed to disagree with the previous chapter. So, a good read, but a few minor faults meant I kept bouncing out of the story. Still, if there was a (better edited) sequel, I would be interested.