Hali
1. If you're gonna add trigger warnings, try to tag not just the kinks but also the literal abuse in the book
2. I know Im an idiot for being invested in the plot of erotica, but why even try to make a big cool plot and then leave 20 plotholes or straight up ignore it at the end?
3. Shoutout to the virtue signaling of mentioning trans and genderqueer people once in the entire book for a corny diversity comment near the end and apart from that having not a single character that isnt a cis man/woman (for clarification, I hated it because its corny, not morally bad or anything. just include actually diverse characters instead of doing this)
4. Grammar mistakes. :-[ To be expected in smaller books but when I already dislike the book they pop out even more I guess
5. Not the worst, but bumps this book down to one star for me: I didnt enjoy the smut at all
1. If you're gonna add trigger warnings, try to tag not just the kinks but also the literal abuse in the book
2. I know Im an idiot for being invested in the plot of erotica, but why even try to make a big cool plot and then leave 20 plotholes or straight up ignore it at the end?
3. Shoutout to the virtue signaling of mentioning trans and genderqueer people once in the entire book for a corny diversity comment near the end and apart from that having not a single character that isnt a cis man/woman (for clarification, I hated it because its corny, not morally bad or anything. just include actually diverse characters instead of doing this)
4. Grammar mistakes. :-[ To be expected in smaller books but when I already dislike the book they pop out even more I guess
5. Not the worst, but bumps this book down to one star for me: I didnt enjoy the smut at all