nico
2.3 ★
didn't dislike it as much as the last one, but this one was just so ... why? predictable, no development whatsoever, what even was her problem? i started this and was hoping the love interest wasn't her best friend who was about to get married (it wasn't, but still uninteresting). i understand it can be hard to write a fleshed out interesting relationship in a short story, but my god it was so uninteresting
2.3 ★
didn't dislike it as much as the last one, but this one was just so ... why? predictable, no development whatsoever, what even was her problem? i started this and was hoping the love interest wasn't her best friend who was about to get married (it wasn't, but still uninteresting). i understand it can be hard to write a fleshed out interesting relationship in a short story, but my god it was so uninteresting