Fluent in Romance
1,657 Reads
The story was okay, but the constant chapter breaks every few pages felt pointless and killed the narrative flow. I also struggled with the hero; he was a bit too much of a pushover for my liking. Plus, the quotes at the start of each chapter didn't add anything—they were just distracting.
The story was okay, but the constant chapter breaks every few pages felt pointless and killed the narrative flow. I also struggled with the hero; he was a bit too much of a pushover for my liking. Plus, the quotes at the start of each chapter didn't add anything—they were just distracting.