Russell
Promise of Blood is very clearly a debut album, but Brian shows a lot of promise. There was plenty of innovation, between the flintlock sorcery, and the political setting -- the book starts at the tail end of a planned coup, and explores the months that follow, with all the intrigue you'd expect. The world-building is as deep as you'd expect from a student of Sanderson, with an interesting take on magic, spread across the Privileged, who can touch the Else to to control the elements, the Marked, who have a special affinity for gunpowder, and the Knacked, who have small, unique talents.
Where the book stumbles a bit is in it's pacing. He's again clearly influenced by Sanderson here, typically following one POV per chapter, but there are various points in the book where the POV shifts inexplicably in the middle of the chapter short of where you'd expect to shift. Towards the end of the book this can get a bit confusing, with multiple POVs in the last few chapters. While the action is fast paced, the constant shifts pull you out of the action a bit, requiring a mental reset.
The characters are also a mix, with a few quite interesting characters (Adamat, Taniel), who are relatable both in their virtues and flaws, but several characters, especially the female characters, that are a bit one-dimensional (I'd have to re-read to be sure, but I think if this book passes the Bechdel test, it's incidental). There are also a few odd moments in the book which seem to dramatically break with the setup of the character, for example, whenthe normally even-keeled, logic driven Adamat appears to lose himself in the bloodlust of a boxing match.
All in though, this was an admirable debut, I'm looking forward to the next few in the series.
Promise of Blood is very clearly a debut album, but Brian shows a lot of promise. There was plenty of innovation, between the flintlock sorcery, and the political setting -- the book starts at the tail end of a planned coup, and explores the months that follow, with all the intrigue you'd expect. The world-building is as deep as you'd expect from a student of Sanderson, with an interesting take on magic, spread across the Privileged, who can touch the Else to to control the elements, the Marked, who have a special affinity for gunpowder, and the Knacked, who have small, unique talents.
Where the book stumbles a bit is in it's pacing. He's again clearly influenced by Sanderson here, typically following one POV per chapter, but there are various points in the book where the POV shifts inexplicably in the middle of the chapter short of where you'd expect to shift. Towards the end of the book this can get a bit confusing, with multiple POVs in the last few chapters. While the action is fast paced, the constant shifts pull you out of the action a bit, requiring a mental reset.
The characters are also a mix, with a few quite interesting characters (Adamat, Taniel), who are relatable both in their virtues and flaws, but several characters, especially the female characters, that are a bit one-dimensional (I'd have to re-read to be sure, but I think if this book passes the Bechdel test, it's incidental). There are also a few odd moments in the book which seem to dramatically break with the setup of the character, for example, whenthe normally even-keeled, logic driven Adamat appears to lose himself in the bloodlust of a boxing match.
All in though, this was an admirable debut, I'm looking forward to the next few in the series.