
Cons:
- The characters are quite wooden, with their development either rushed, or done “off screen”.
- Some parts of the story are too shallow/glossed over, and others way too detailed; as such, the reading can be stilted, and jarring.
Pros:
- Absolutely wicked fun.
- Overall a good story, with some great action.
- The writing is somewhat simplistic, it's easy to get into the groove and visualise, and so it can be a real page turner.
I enjoyed it, and will likely read it again someday. I'm keen for the sequels.
Honestly, wow. The way Polly expertly juggled the Now and Then of this story is incredible.
Fantastic story (in a depressing kind of way) told very well.
There are some areas that could have used improvement, as is expected for a second novel, but Polly should be exceedingly proud of what she's achieved.
OK, so the first 2/3 of the book I was struggling with the main character a bit, until more details were revealed and it was clear we were dealing with cPTSD and lots of other things; after that it all clicked and I heart-breakingly loved her.
I was leaning to 3.5 stars up until this point, but the last 1/3 took it to 4.5, and so I've evened it at 4. I'm so glad to have read it, and think the author should be incredibly proud of their work!!
The three intertwined timelines in the same physical space was well done, and the interlinked stories easy to follow. For the most part the characters were well written, and the authors intent for your trust, distrust, like, and dislike felt very balanced.
Unfortunately I found the ending unsatisfying, and the relationship between the two “now” characters a bit too 2 dimensional, and their relationship troubles a bit disheartening.
Overall, I'm glad to have read it, and would recommend it.
4.75 out of 5. Absolutely sensational!!
0.25 is only because occasionally the author would jump around perspective between paragraphs, which was confusing, but it was only a small bit, and you'd easily readjust.
For a debut novel, amazing. Well done Emma!
Also, the twist? Holy Mother, I was not ready, and could not predict it. Just wow!
Cons:
- The characters are quite wooden, with their development either rushed, or done “off screen”.
- Some parts of the story are too shallow/glossed over, and others way too detailed; as such, the reading can be stilted, and jarring.
Pros:
- Absolutely wicked fun.
- Overall a good story, with some great action.
- The writing is somewhat simplistic, it's easy to get into the groove and visualise, and so it can be a real page turner.
I enjoyed it, and will likely read it again someday. I'm keen for the sequels.