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A Second Story
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A Second Story
Writing is too weak, pure "tell, don't show". Characters' feelings are shallow, out-of-nowhere, instant lust. Plot is flimsy.
Writing is too weak, pure "tell, don't show". Characters' feelings are shallow, out-of-nowhere, instant lust. Plot is flimsy.