Overall this book is sensational (in a good way). I like the made-up words “spandexing” and “chastitying”, as well as how a secret hideout becomes central to the story. No spoilers!
It's interesting to read this quite soon after I finished a similar romance novel (“European Tour”, L.V. Lewis, between a rock star and a pop princess). Two concerns: the protagonist's male lover could have been hinted at earlier because it's a bit unexpected to find the romantic element at around 21% of a romantic comedy; and the comic relief embodied by the grandmother figure might have a closer tie to to the central romance, though I felt that wasn't explored deeply enough. On the flip side, though, the book is light-hearted and funny, and the tone of the book, especially after the introduction of the protagonist's male lover, is its greatest strength.
Beneath the handsome :p cover is a riveting page-turner. K.M. paints this world vividly and even throws in some surprising insights (twists?) about the interconnectedness of the real and dream worlds. Apart from a jarring unfamiliar name near the end (Pluto?) of the book, this book has a place alongside heralded portal fantasy novels.
Compared with K.M.'s free writing guide “5 Secrets to Story Structure”, this book is packed with examples from literature and film to illustrate the different parts of a novel. It has a heavy-duty feel to it, more akin to a reference book than something to be read in one sitting.
Upon finishing the section on the resolution, I wondered why I had only finished half of the book. It turns out that the rest of the book talks about effective scenes and sentences, and I wanted to bludgeon myself for thinking, “I didn't see that coming.”
“Zero to Hero” (Peter Thiel) says that if one wants their business to break out, they should be a monopoly. A chapter in this book, though, gives me the impression that everyone has to compete in the business world. It's only true in general, and few entrepreneurs find the secret that's their cash cow. If that chapter on competition had swapped its fatalistic tone for an emphasis on self-education and networking, it would have been more helpful.