一緒にいただきます
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Average rating3.5
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Average rating3.5
誰かと一緒に食べるご飯は、
なんでこんなに美味しいんだろう――
お人好しなお弁当屋さん&泣き虫小説家の
心も体も満たされるvほかほかラブ!!
両親が営んでいた、商店街にある小さなお弁当屋。
店をたたもうとしていた両親を説得し、
店を継ぐ決意をした亮。けれどなかなか
経営は上手くいかず、売り上げも伸び悩んでいた。
そんなある日、腹をすかせた見知らぬ青年が
店の前で倒れ込んでしまった!?
とりあえず家に運び、店の残り物のご飯を
食べてもらうことに。その青年・光太郎は、
小説家としてデビューするもプレッシャーから
原稿が書けなくなり、逃げ出してしまったと
いうのだ。幼少期から施設で育ち、
亮の作ったご飯を「家族の味だ」と嬉しそうに
食べる光太郎を放っておくことができず、
家に居候させることに。
店の手伝いをしてもらいながら小説を
書き上げたら見せてもらうことを条件に、
二人の同居生活が始まって…!?
Reviews with the most likes.
... Ok, but why didn't your dad just teach you the damn recipe?
Anyway, this was fine. Just fine. But just fine in a more positive way than a low 3 “just fine". I thought Roy and Kotaro were cute together, I also most cried seeing them try to do a high five but Kotaro didn't have his glasses on so they missed and I loved everything about that bit. My only problem was how the dialogue flowed. something about the dialogue felt off in a way that felt like I was missing context. Like, the amount of times I've said “why bring that up out of nowhere" or “who asked" was a lot.
The way they brought up certain topics felt forced, like they were being told their next line off screen while also being told to stay on track. There was a part where Masuda came by to pick up the order list and, without being promoted, brought up Kotaro was down at the cafe, kicking off the conflict. That's just one of three parts that's stood out to me like that, but It didn't make sense for him to bring that up the way he did because it didn't feel natural to the conversation. It came off as gossip to start something for no reason and that's just how a lot of conversations went in this story. When people talked it either felt like a tonal whiplash or or “who asked" moment.
