A Living Dungeon

I have no idea why people give this 4 and 5 stars. I could only get through about ten percent of the book. The writing is just unrelentingly awful! Filled with typos, point of view and character changes that are never clearly indicated, short sentences that repeat words, and unclear descriptions. This is a perfect example: “Each time, the square side of the stone was facing the center of the strange gemstone, which was glowing with a strange white light.” Keep in mind that the adjective “strange” had been used three previous times on that single page! Without some heavy editing, this book is just unreadable.