A Special Delivery

This is a nice set of moments, but it isn't really a story. There is no conflict, which does not usually bother me, but there's no real moment of connection either, just a couple of characters who kind of like each other and somehow end up together.

There's so much missing. In one of the first scenes, Colin's dog gets a little aggressively affectionate with James, and James laughs. But Colin doesn't react to James laughing. More importantly, who is Colin? What does he want out of life? Are he and James suited well to each other? I don't know. ¯_(ツ)_/¯