Afterlife University: Game Knot Over

I kind of see what the author wanted to do with this short story but the quality of the writing was way too low to make it a good story.

Some reviews suggest that the story could benefit from being a longer story, but I think it would actually be better as a flash fiction with fewer characters. It would have allowed the writer to (maybe) struggle less with the transitions between events, thoughts, and spatial dimensions.

The dialogues, the transitions, and the world building are the weaknesses of the story. The high level concept is what's slightly better.

Thank you NetGalley and the publisher for providing me a copy of this book in exchange for my honest review.