Big Bad Daddy

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15

I liked this! It was a quick read with very light mafia action and age gap with ddlg. It was over all super cute but just a few parts didn't work for me. A few times the dialogue felt unnatural and that immediately takes me out of a book. Another aspect was simply the third act conflict which is often an issue for me in novellas. It felt so incredibly rushed and simply unnecessary. It was resolved in a completely unexpected way with the heroine taking change and it kind of just working? I would give it a try if you can look past a few obstacles in order to have a sweet, kinky novella read with a slice of mafia.

January 10, 2024Report this review