Black Wings Beating

This highly-anticipated young adult fantasy was - alright. I'm a little disappointed, actually. I love birds. I grew up with a number of parrots, and crows are still one of my favorite animals. So a book where falconry is a central part of the culture, and they have to go hunt down a mythical bird? Count me in! Unfortunately this book suffers from the “reluctant hero” trope, which is far too common in YA and gets tiring.

The two main characters in this book are twins. We have Brysen, who was never good enough for their alcoholic father, and was beaten regularly. He's also stubborn, irresponsible, and reckless. His sister has an ancient power to control falcons, but she refuses to learn how to control it because she doesn't want to overshadow her good-for-nothing brother. (She also might be asexual, but it's not explicitly stated in the book. It's heavily implied, though.)

The two dysfunctional siblings set out to capture the near-mythical bird that killed their father, in order to save the life of Brysen's lover, falconry trainer, and manipulator, Dymian. They're joined by Nyall, a boy in love with Kylee who doesn't care that she doesn't love him back. (In the truly-good-guy way, not in the creepy way. I like Nyall. He's good people.)

They of course run into dangers in the mountains that the bird lives in, and the book is about that journey. Interspersed with their story is the occasional scene of the invaders sweeping across the land elsewhere. I wish we had a better sense of time - both how long before the invaders near the Six Villages where Brysen and Kylee are, and how long their journey in the mountains takes. That could have been much better communicated.

Kylee frustrates me - she could be so amazing, and if she'd use her powers, it could get her what she wants. She's trying to earn enough money catching and selling birds of prey to get out of the business entirely. (She has to pay off their father's debts first.) So why not use her powers to call down a few of the most valuable birds and BE DONE WITH IT? How does this not occur to her? As far as I can tell, the only real reason she doesn't want to be a falconer is she knows she'd be excellent at it and she doesn't want to overshadow her brother, whose dream it's been to be a great falconer. News flash. Your brother is worthless, girl. If he wants to be great maybe he should buckle down and focus instead of blaming those around him for his misfortunes.

So I'm not sure what my overall opinion of this book is. The world-building is shaping up to be interesting, but needs more fleshing out. The writing itself is pretty good, it flows nicely but needs a better sense of time. The characters' motivations are clear but occasionally frustrating. I am a little invested in seeing what happens in the next book, but I'm not sure I'm invested enough to spend the time to read it. I'll make that decision when it comes out, I suppose.

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