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Death Checks Inn

2013 • 104 pages

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15

This is only my point of view as a reader.

This story reminded me of basic crime shows I've watched over the years... would never have guessed because the clues weren't there.

I gave this 3 stars because of the excessive use of the word ‘very' and because the editing could have been better. There were extra words that shouldn't have been included and at least one incorrect word used.

Other than that, I did like the story. If those errors are corrected then I might give a higher rating.

October 17, 2014Report this review