Dissension

In this series, the descriptions and details of battle action can be a bit repetitive. Since I don't understand the differences between various model numbers of military equipment, I get the feeling that some parts of the story just go over my head as gobbledygook. In my mind, the author never explained how a sporting goods store with its own well for water can handle the toilet usage for more than 200 people for several months. In my experience, buildings with their own well will also have their own septic system - and I just don't understand how that would have the necessary capacity. I think I can point out one other plot problem without giving a spoiler - the motivation of the female enemy is incomprehensible to me. If you accept her emotional motivation (for whatever reason), then I can't understand her actions in regards to Lynn. Nonetheless, I congratulate the author for writing a story that can still hold a reader through 6 books